This is a review of 5,000 words, which can be your opening chapters or an extract from another part of the novel. Following a 1 hour coaching session, I provide you with a written report covering suggestions for how you might improve your manuscript - this can be targeted at something specific, such as your writing style, pace, characterisation, dialogue and voice that you want to address, or can be a broader review of your manuscript extract.

This is a more detailed review of your first 10,000 words (or it can be an extract from another part of the novel) and your synopsis of up to 2 pages. Following a 1 hour coaching session, I provide you with a report covering suggestions for how you might improve your manuscript - this can be targeted at something specific that you want to address, such as story structure, plot, pace, characterisation, dialogue, voice and your writing style, or it can be a broader review of your manuscript extract.



Ready to query agents? I review your query letter/email, your synopsis of up to 2 pages (most agents request a 1 or 2 page synopsis), and your first 10,000 words. Following a 1 hour coaching session, I provide you with a report with suggestions for how to improve your submission pack. Please note, I cannot guarantee your success in achieving requests from agents asking to receive the full manuscript, but I can support you in having the best possible submission pack you can produce.